tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2619743764213415433.post8973071204433994785..comments2023-11-03T07:07:55.456-05:00Comments on CoPhilosophy: Section 10: Final Report #1 of 4, Rousseau and EmilePhilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02115141650963300011noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2619743764213415433.post-34250533321189782052014-11-16T19:14:15.367-06:002014-11-16T19:14:15.367-06:00Thank you, Dr. Oliver and Billy! I will most defin...Thank you, Dr. Oliver and Billy! I will most definitely take in to account all of your suggestions!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08946039947716224649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2619743764213415433.post-33425738628943877862014-11-15T21:11:42.407-06:002014-11-15T21:11:42.407-06:00Katherine- your post was quite well done. Informa...Katherine- your post was quite well done. Informative, well laid out, and clearly made from subject matter expertise. Good job leading the way.<br /><br />My only suggestions for you would be these...<br /><br />1) Consider adding links to things that you might not have the time to go into detail on, but consider good info for others. For instance, when Dr. Oliver talks about Emile, the way to give your readers the opportunity to get it for themselves by hyper-linking this with the text- http://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/5427 Project Gutenberg is a great resource for ebooks of works in the public domain (ie: old) without having to pay Amazon or online publishers.<br /><br />2) Make sure you are watching the formatting, spacing and all that jazz between sections and paragraphs. Play around with it to gain experience. Web based user interfaces aren't too difficult to pick up. Use the preview button to make sure everything looks like you want it to before posting. Treat it like a paper, get it done, then take a break and come back to it with fresh eyes to catch any mistakes you might have missed from being so immersed in it.<br /><br />Your work is solid and you should be good to go for your next follow on posts regardless, however.<br /><br />-BillyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2619743764213415433.post-69140915062093357742014-11-15T06:58:54.989-06:002014-11-15T06:58:54.989-06:00Excellent post, Katherine! You've set the bar ...Excellent post, Katherine! You've set the bar high for us. Maybe in your next installment you can include a link to the etext of Emile or whichever work of Rousseau's you'll be spotlighting next - my personal favorite, btw, was his late "Reveries of the Solitary Walker."Philhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02115141650963300011noreply@blogger.com